reads fine to me,if you put the pg 12 part immediately after the page 14 bit, as in:



"As with tacking, the ideal is to keep the telltales flowing on your jib as long as possible through the jibe. As the boat turns downwind, ease your jib out simultaneously until just before the main jibe. [Then] the crew must get the jib across to the new side and set it in downwind position immediately."